I love Michael being all flustered that Gen rendered him obsolete. It makes me giggle. And telling Krysta off like that was great. She, of course, isn’t out of the picture.
I am *so* sorry for the ending. I had meant to go straight into Merri telling Gen the truth, but it seemed better this way ‘cause I wanted it done from Merri’s POV (and I don’t like POV switches mid-scene mid-chapter).
Oh, and Gen’s joke suggesting Michael is a drag queen was put there specifically for my message board peeps. If you don’t get it, then you should probably hang at my forum a bit more often.
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"She wrapped evil around her like a large, evil Mexican serape."
Author Commentary
I love Michael being all flustered that Gen rendered him obsolete. It makes me giggle. And telling Krysta off like that was great. She, of course, isn’t out of the picture.
I am *so* sorry for the ending. I had meant to go straight into Merri telling Gen the truth, but it seemed better this way ‘cause I wanted it done from Merri’s POV (and I don’t like POV switches mid-scene mid-chapter).
Oh, and Gen’s joke suggesting Michael is a drag queen was put there specifically for my message board peeps.
If you don’t get it, then you should probably hang at my forum a bit more often.
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"She wrapped evil around her like a large, evil Mexican serape."