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Gen and Levi are nearly back to being BFFs! Not that I’m confident it’ll last through Part Two, but it makes me happy for now.

I realize Lev’s confession about loving Sage is a bit of a jump from anything he said in Part One—he always just mentioned having a crush on her, and I think Gen referred to his feelings that way as well. Presumably, he realized at some point between seeing Sage the night before and Gen that morning that he was, in fact, in love with her. Or maybe I’m retconning...

I also really like Gen and Michael’s scene. He’s mildly nicer to her when not quite awake and makes her tea. That just made me giggle. And she stood up to him—go Gen! Sure, he openly threatened to kill her, but I think she took it well.

And finally, I teased on my MySpace blog months ago that I had an “OMG!” moment coming up that was alllll the fault of fellow author Elaine Corvidae. The final scene, my friends, is what I referred to. Eye-wink All I can say is that it isn’t what it seems.

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