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Looking back at this chapter, I realize everyone does a hell of a lot of talking. And this was supposed to be an action-y chapter...

I had originally meant for the confrontation between Sage and Michael to be a bit longer and more exciting, but this is Gen's POV after all, and a) she doesn't care, and b) she's a little confused about what's going on between them as well. One thing I didn't expect was the level of tension between Sage and Michael.

And we also have some tensions arising between Sage, Hayden, and Levi. Honestly guys, this triangle isn't going anywhere any time. And if anyone was wondering about precisely how much Hayden knows about Sage and what she can do, this should answer that for you.

Finally, super extra bonus points to those who can explain all the nerdy references in the Sage/Hayden scene. And I really liked the idea of The Warrior being terrible at fighting video games. It amuses me.

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