Nicely done...I'm already intrigued...I remember a while back reading how much you hate doing first chapters but this one went off without a hitch IMO...I'm already liking Briar as she bears a mild resemblance to Gen from CoTA and I like what you did with the Lilith angle...Not many people aren't familiar with Lilith as far as religious mythology goes and I think you did an excellent job spinning her character to fit the story from what I've seen so far...You keep writing 'em and I'll damn sure keep reading 'em...I've said this before, but "You Rock, Skyla."
#1 Nicely done...I'm already
Nicely done...I'm already intrigued...I remember a while back reading how much you hate doing first chapters but this one went off without a hitch IMO...I'm already liking Briar as she bears a mild resemblance to Gen from CoTA and I like what you did with the Lilith angle...Not many people aren't familiar with Lilith as far as religious mythology goes and I think you did an excellent job spinning her character to fit the story from what I've seen so far...You keep writing 'em and I'll damn sure keep reading 'em...I've said this before, but "You Rock, Skyla."
