Submitted by Khari (not verified) on Wed, 08/05/2009 - 02:04.
Great story, especially love your characters, they come across as very real Sebastian is probably my favourite, amusingly that is my eldest son's name! (named after Sebastian from Anne Bishops 'The Landscapes of Ephemera' series) Also Liam is strangely endearing, despite how much of a prat he is. I'll credit that to your writing as I'd probably hate someone like that in reality Can't wait to see more!
#1 Great story, especially love
Great story, especially love your characters, they come across as very real
Sebastian is probably my favourite, amusingly that is my eldest son's name! (named after Sebastian from Anne Bishops 'The Landscapes of Ephemera' series) Also Liam is strangely endearing, despite how much of a prat he is. I'll credit that to your writing as I'd probably hate someone like that in reality
Can't wait to see more!